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jeremy18
Jeremy Arblaster
United Kingdom, Sheffield

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Bastard Love

I knew one day I'd find you,
I just had to look.
To find that special someone
No fairytale, no book.

You're exactly the same as me,
You self-destruct,
As through alcohol and one-night stands.
We drink and dance to the same bands
With barbed wire around our hearts,
Our unprotected sexual parts
Congregate in ecstasy,
But in the morning I will leave,

Without a kiss goodbye, a see you later
For this, my love, is what I've been waiting.
A match made in the darkest corner of Heaven
I'll see you, or some other girl tomorrow morning, at 7.

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jahanwisingh Comment by: jahanwisingh - 2007-12-19 23:37
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*applause*

The poem had a touch of truth along with a hint of romance in it. I especially liked the second para. nice work! :)
BrookeOlive Comment by: BrookeOlive - 2007-10-02 01:58
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nice, you are been really forthcoming and a dark honesty like that deserves a round of applause. (smattering of heartfelt applause) An emotive piece, this poem makes me want to drink...in a good way.
Loloix Comment by: Loloix - 2007-09-06 18:25
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i can feel the overflow of emotions here..
MutteringRetreat Comment by: MutteringRetreat - 2007-09-06 14:15
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I liked this poem.Very honest, and if you're as warped as me, it's kind of romantic.

Thanks for sharing I really enjoyed it.
zayra yves Comment by: zayra yves - 2007-09-05 23:17
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This is definitely a truth telling poem with a whimsical touch or an ironic one.
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