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It's Magic Wee #11
Carla dumped her purse on the table, and headed straight for the fridge. She paused at the picture of her two hundred, thirty-six pound frame on the door.
'Fuck it,'� she grasped the handle in search of last night's cheesecake. It wasn't there.
'How can an entire cheesecake disappear?'�
Her husband closed the refrigerator door. 'It's magic.'�
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| This hits home with me! My husband and I fight over food all the time. He usually gets to it first and when I want something-it's gone. What a great little story. |
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thank for reading this Brit, Mark, and Garret. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Comment by: gmarco - 2007-09-12 01:43
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Oh man, now I want some cheesecake.
Very funny, I can imagine a either a knowing smile or a face of guilt on the husband.
-Garrett |
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Not a cheesecake fan, m'self...
Oreo cookies and cream ice cream, though....
Funny stuffing!
mark |
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ahahaha! its amazing that you were able to create such a realistic (and funny) scene in 60 little words!
although i'd be careful if I were her husband.....his wife could kick his butt any day! ;-) |
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