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ladytwigliot
Theresa Duddy
United States, California, Fresno

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The Leviathan

Ensign-beware the Leviathan,
And the very ports they blow,
All the quarters that they know
While two faces-it's never snowed over the ocean
Never tempt the Lord your God
Loose lips let pride show
And sink Titanic ships
Nine fathoms deep he had followed us
From the land of mist and snow
Can you hear the dolphin's cry?
Ensign-beware the Leviathan.

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DansomeDan Comment by: DansomeDan - 2007-08-19 21:50
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I love it solely for the Dolphin's Cry line since that's one of my favourite songs from Live :p Haha, but it's all pretty nice with a good strong voice and imagery.
TheWriter882 Comment by: TheWriter882 - 2007-07-11 09:58
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Nice flow, imagery and feeling. This a a pretty good poem. Keep up the good work.
Arley Comment by: Arley Online- 2007-05-23 12:03
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I like the poem but the fourth line confuses me.
Harris3dgn Comment by: Harris3dgn - 2007-03-27 19:02
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Concise, imginative, and with a hint of wisdom. Good poem.
Comment by: - 2007-02-24 13:57
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"it's never snowed over the ocean" -- beautiful imagery!
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