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driftersonline
Gas Beer and Cheeseburgers
Canada, Alberta, A small Hamlet

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a drunk laughs

I wish I had whiskey
and beer on my breath
instead I drink coffee
postponing my death
I may live forever
but this I don't know
at least a drunk laughs
before he must go

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driftersonline Comment by: driftersonline - 2008-02-15 10:10
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Thanks. I've been a sober sid for a few days now.
Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2008-02-15 09:34
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Nice little poem, driftersonline. If you're gonna go, best to go out singing and laughing. I'm a coffee drinker drinker myself, so not a beer drinker or hell raiser. Sober Sid, in fact.

Thanks for the read.
Grae:)
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