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driftersonline
Gas Beer and Cheeseburgers
Canada, Alberta, A small Hamlet

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Sweat

hair stuck to her shoulder
beer and sweat
she trys to leave the bar
but they won't let her yet
so she stays on till all the dicks are gone
and she's drinkin' coffee at 6

~driftersonline~

September 10, 2007

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Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-11-28 11:47
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I figure women work so hard that it's a man's responsibility to cheer them up, to make them laugh, to teach by example how to just chill.
driftersonline Comment by: driftersonline - 2007-09-10 23:20
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she does try
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-09-10 23:13
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Nice snapshot.

I believe it's "tries".
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