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VernSkags
Vern Skags
Australia, VIC, Melbourne

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Pornographic Blockbuster

On the big-screen
girls are sucking cocks
& licking each other out
like ice-cream tubs

& they're all pretty
& fucked up; eyes either
blooming or pinned -

And Wagner's
Ride of the Valkyries
is playing in the background;

loud & horrific
like the cinematic
exhileration of war

that fills the screens
of Hollywood with fire -

And I wonder if they
still believe in love
or if they used
to believe in love.

And then I rememeber
that it doesn't matter,

I'm only supposed
To ride the explosion.

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VernSkags Comment by: VernSkags - 2007-09-12 05:43
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cheers McJesus. hope yr enjoy a few of mah other bits from time to time to. Will check out some of yr work too..... and might I say that yr possess a fine and impressive beard.
Boomer McJesus Comment by: Boomer McJesus - 2007-09-11 12:19
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Awesome satire! I like the line about And Wagner's Ride of the Valkyries, and the last couple of lines as well.

Who knows, perhaps the scenario you describe may actually manifest itself in Ohio movie theaters in mid-afternoon some day...
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