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winklett
Amy Krebs
United States, NY, Albany

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Backdoor

My door opens, cracked, a creak...
the longed-for sounds of years and years ago

but now, today, you break and enter,
wanted not,
an occurrence of my memory
through that backdoor left unbarred.

A room
empty of sound

all our journeys sung, all sold away
on stretched and queerly colored canvases:

on one your star coat plunges, shot-out, black, unknown;
another: melted see-through ruby clock
suspended over space;

then the Kansas green tornado sky
you once spoke of

and last, my dream attendant's
vacant cheerless face,
washed and wrung each sleepless day to dry.

Please go.
Go unadorned by sympathy, by art. Go
loudly now
through that backdoor left cracked open.

A room
empty of sound

locked and barred anew at your departure.

- - -

(This poem does not use the letter "i.")

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zzbaggins Comment by: zzbaggins - 2008-01-11 02:26
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Nice!

My best,
Jeff
tunde Comment by: tunde - 2007-09-11 18:48
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well, this is a beautiful poem...and i love it... congrats!
crazybritt Comment by: crazybritt - 2007-09-11 17:41
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even without the burden of being "i"-free, its a beautiful poem. i can tell how carefully u thought over each word. i love the very first line "cracked, a creak" and "go unadorned by sympathy, by art".
BradlyScribbles Comment by: BradlyScribbles - 2007-09-11 15:46
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A talented feat. It was a very good read, it seems i can relate to it in a way. Great job! :]
jakrebs Comment by: jakrebs Online- 2007-09-11 15:30
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Do our comments need to be "i" free too? OK, here goes. Yes, now and then who wouldn't want our heads protected by a huge metal safe doors deadbolted, sealed, and secured to protect us from intrud...whoops how about interlope...Whoops agai...

How about great poem Honey.
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