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Backdoor
My door opens, cracked, a creak...
the longed-for sounds of years and years ago
but now, today, you break and enter,
wanted not,
an occurrence of my memory
through that backdoor left unbarred.
A room
empty of sound
all our journeys sung, all sold away
on stretched and queerly colored canvases:
on one your star coat plunges, shot-out, black, unknown;
another: melted see-through ruby clock
suspended over space;
then the Kansas green tornado sky
you once spoke of
and last, my dream attendant's
vacant cheerless face,
washed and wrung each sleepless day to dry.
Please go.
Go unadorned by sympathy, by art. Go
loudly now
through that backdoor left cracked open.
A room
empty of sound
locked and barred anew at your departure.
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(This poem does not use the letter "i.")
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Nice!
My best,
Jeff |
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Comment by: tunde - 2007-09-11 18:48
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| well, this is a beautiful poem...and i love it... congrats! |
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| even without the burden of being "i"-free, its a beautiful poem. i can tell how carefully u thought over each word. i love the very first line "cracked, a creak" and "go unadorned by sympathy, by art". |
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| A talented feat. It was a very good read, it seems i can relate to it in a way. Great job! :] |
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Comment by: jakrebs Online- 2007-09-11 15:30
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Do our comments need to be "i" free too? OK, here goes. Yes, now and then who wouldn't want our heads protected by a huge metal safe doors deadbolted, sealed, and secured to protect us from intrud...whoops how about interlope...Whoops agai...
How about great poem Honey. |
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