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junie2
jenna burlock
United States, california, la mesa

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it's magic

It's Magic

We have such strong feelings, as our eyes are gazing at each other. Having the same thoughts of love and life. Two people caring for one another very deeply. Saying ' I do' and ' till death do us part!' Forever loving, forever living as we share our lives together. This feeling we have is like none can compare for ' its magic!'

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Shadowdancer Comment by: Shadowdancer - 2007-10-01 23:38
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I've entered these little "wee competitions". They're such a challenge, and you've done a great job with this one. From past experience, I know karjon HATES exclamation points!!!!! (oops)
karjon Comment by: karjon - 2007-09-13 07:16
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Hi Jenna

Sweet wee story with lovely sentiments.

There's an apostrophe missing from 'it's' - and, erm, those exclamation marks - do you reaaly need them?

Thanks for taking part.

Cheers

Karen
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