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metaphysicalg
George McMillan, Jr
United States, PA, York

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Prior To Conception

The space hasn't entered the room
It's not trapped in the room
Just because the door is shut
The space was already here
And still is
Inside, outside, and throughout
The room was just imposed onto the space
The space remains unchanged and unaffected

So we never entered the beingness (mind-body)
Not trapped in it
Not affected by it
It's just something imposed onto us/me
Just like the space
I was here before, here now, and
Will be here long after the beingness goes
Unchanged and unaffected

But I didn't enter (the womb)
I wasn't even pulled in
Anymore than space gets pulled into a room
Prior to conception,
I was in the same state I am in now
The only change was the beingness
Being imposed onto me
It doesn't matter though
I remain unchanged and unaffected


September 11, 2007

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metaphysicalg Comment by: metaphysicalg - 2007-09-12 17:54
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Close. I'm not the body or the soul(the beingness/I-am-ness/consciousness). I exist prior to both.
brigitteliebenbe Comment by: brigitteliebenbe - 2007-09-12 07:19
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Very cool - our souls exist even before we do!
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