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VernSkags
Vern Skags
Australia, VIC, Melbourne

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He Sure Got To Know A Lot About Shoes

the shoes were piled high in the wardrobe
every kind imaginable
stacked up and TEetErInG in towers
everytime he opened the wardrobe
they would fall upon him and he would have
to stack them up again
under a quarter had been worn
but she convinced him she needed more
more shoes
so
he bought her
a pair of trainers
some expensive pumps
3/4 length leather boots
chamois sandles
& a chic set of thongs
& she took them
out of their boxes
& stacked them
up
ready...

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Apothy Comment by: Apothy - 2007-09-13 22:46
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Its a very entertaining read.
VernSkags Comment by: VernSkags - 2007-09-12 07:30
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or to be continually maintained and then finally crushed by....Ho-Hum.
brigitteliebenbe Comment by: brigitteliebenbe - 2007-09-12 07:11
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Is love just shoes? For her obviously and for him - a mountain to be climbed!
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