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brigitteliebenbe
brigitte liebenberg
South Africa, Underberg

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The Loss of Innocence

Yellowed fingers, too many unfiltered cigarettes
Leaving stains that cannot be removed
By use of soap and water.

Chipped nails, torn, ragged, broken, uncared for
Black with oil and deposits of tar
Your life shown in the state of your hands.

Voice rough with smoke, breath of nicotine
And scent of malted grain
Sout smell of sweat and excitement.

Why would you choose to sully innocence
With your filth and dirt?

Leaving a shining soul tarnished.

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"There and Back Again"

by brigitte liebenberg



A powerful, poetic journey back from the brink - literally! The poetry in this book is a direct result of the creative processes started by entering therapy for depression.The poetry speaks for itself and allows others to relate to the content in their own ways.

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