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bubblegum
joanne holden
United Kingdom

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quiet please!!!!

We speak aloud,
Not shout out loud,
But whisper together with one another.

Behind our hands,
Or between the shelves,
In the quiet section at the library

We chanter away,
Repeating our mournful murmur
The repetition does excite us so.

FOR WHEN WE SHOUT,
WE CAN LET IT ALL OUT,
TO EXPLODE AND SCARE ALL THE OLD FOLK!

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Stefan Comment by: Stefan - 2007-11-11 14:59
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This suggests you go about scaring old folks.
Bipolaris Comment by: Bipolaris - 2007-07-07 14:06
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Hahaha! I love how you capitalize to indicate shouting.
Plurlove Comment by: Plurlove - 2006-02-07 10:13
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I LIKED IT!!!
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