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NikkiHope
Domenica Martinello
Canada, Montreal

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Divine Intervention

Superstitions, karma, 11:11
Surprises, reading my mind, words
Moving like a film, what a smooth transition
In my room, dark except for a single wax candle, gentle and flickering.

Singing to me in your car at 3:00 am
Your stubble brushing my cheek and your lips tickling my neck,
The butterflies in my stomach burst into fireworks, brilliant, spontaneous.

Lyrics to a song plucking the thoughts right out of your head, feeling something dance down your spine'
Goosebumps, whispers, biting your lip then biting mine.

Sex appeal, intuition, there's always a reason
Superstitions, karma, 11:11
Divine Intervention.

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metaphysicalg Comment by: metaphysicalg - 2008-04-12 20:28
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Has a nice rhythm to it and feels like a familiar experience. Nice job putting it into words.
ladylovelace Comment by: ladylovelace - 2007-10-28 23:39
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Awww this is sweet...
Bucho Comment by: Bucho - 2007-10-21 21:18
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ahhhh...this has got a nice musicality to it...really dig it. i like the bookending of the repetition you've got at the start and the end of the piece. that's always nice...
jonsonkuhn Comment by: jonsonkuhn - 2007-10-15 17:12
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Beautiful. So well written and poetic. I especially enjoyed the idea of singing to someone in their car at 3 am. Who hasn't done that? This was great and thanks for sharing it. Take care.

-Jonson Kuhn
DansomeDan Comment by: DansomeDan - 2007-10-01 02:29
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Beautiful stuff, felt it deep down in my bones.
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