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mciheaustin
michelle austin
United States, florida, miami

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Looking for Soul

what's it all about?
feelings of doubt
fill my mind

visions of earth
so far below me

hovering over
flying high
looking down
on life

like an angel
watching over
her most prized
possession

a session
in self reflection

how can I be more?
how can I settle
the score of being saved?

we pave such a long
twisting road out of
uneven rock

as the clock ticks
we knock on
forevers door
looking for more

feeling ignored
by the almighty
so we fly

escaping
wanting the high
chasing dragons

looking for soul

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Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-05-20 16:42
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This is OK but you don't tell us what we need to know.

What is the angel's most prized possession?
voodoochild Comment by: voodoochild - 2007-10-01 09:53
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hmmm.. i like the way you construct your writing w/ fine short words... hope you find that faith overcomes the doubt... take care! =)
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