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Boomer McJesus
Boomer McJesus
United States, WA, Seattle

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"Sir"

We drift through the city streets, scanning up and down the block for the venue of the concert. The air was cool and I feel glad that it's not raining tonight

At one point we pass by a tall black man. His rugged face with its uneven gray stubble is complemented by the worn-out melancholy army boots which cover his feet. In a deep but passive voice he asks us if we have any change. I walk forward pretending to ignore him, but Todd chooses to turn and meet him in the eye, turning his palms upward and saying,

'I'm sorry, sir, but we don't have anything.'

As we slide away a sonorous vociferation strikes me in the back like an arrow.

'DON'T CALL ME FUCKING 'SIR'!'

I have to say it was a unique moment in my life, for I didn't know whether I should laugh out loud or run in fear.

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jeremydevaughn Comment by: jeremydevaughn - 2008-09-06 21:00
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Short, sweet, and to the point...I'm not sure what that point was, but I'll bet you nailed it.
denaria Comment by: denaria - 2008-03-08 15:53
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Oh I like it. The same sort of thing has happened to me - overexaggerated respect has been flung back in my face as a demonstration of my unconscious patronisation.
Technical point - you slipped tense in the second sentence. Should be, "The air is cool..."
poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-01-20 08:00
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I don't get it....:
Boomer McJesus Comment by: Boomer McJesus - 2007-09-14 07:20
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Sure did...
MMerlino Comment by: MMerlino - 2007-09-13 15:58
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you missed the point.
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