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misplacedmind
Steven Hand
United Kingdom, southlanarkshire, carluke

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The characteristics you show
More than humans that I know
You're a complicated statement
You're a sophisticated show
You're in tune with the faces
You react when I blow
You never lose patience
Always waiting to go
Your face is irreplaceable
Original parts
The rose from the concrete
The brindle brave heart
You singly take out
The light with a bark
Individual stake out
You're brave in the dark
You wait for the start
The break
The dawning
You lay in my heart
You raise my endorphins

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lancslass Comment by: lancslass - 2008-03-27 21:38
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This is lovely. Brought a smile to my face. Thanks!
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