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misplacedmind
Steven Hand
United Kingdom, southlanarkshire, carluke

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Secluded elavation

My personal high
My deceptive eyed disguise
My amorous glance can't connect with the sky
Replenished and fried
You make sense by my side
My blemishes rise
Take lengths to decide
Inconsistent
My pride
My perspective has dried
The scars deep inside have affected my size

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theorionfive Comment by: theorionfive - 2007-11-13 15:15
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This sounds like an Oasis song, sort of. I could picture making a little riff on a Beatles album with those words. Awesome :)
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