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flack47
Mitchell Hargrave
United States, KS, Hutchinson

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The Bracelet

Nobody ever had the nerve to explain to her that she's not a super hero. As long as she didn't end up in any really hairy situations, we all figured it would be OK.

Besides, she looked kind of hot in the outfit.

Things took a serious turn for the worst on one dreary Sunday evening. A man with a hood pulled tight over his head approached us from behind. I could feel something jab into my back.

'Let's make this easy. Just give me your wallet,' he said.

Oh shit.

Just as I was turning to comply, she threw her coat off and faced the assailant.

'I think the only one who will be taking his wallet today is him ' taking it home,' she said.

The man fired a shot at her, which she attempted to block with her 'indestructible' gold bracelet.

'Shit. There goes your wrist, Karen'

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Comment by: - 2007-10-04 18:37
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imo it takes a real man to write something like that. kudos to you.
crystalrose Comment by: crystalrose - 2007-09-18 18:36
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absolutely loved it.
GarethCB Comment by: GarethCB - 2007-09-16 02:02
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This was great. Poor Karen, she was only trying to help.
flack47 Comment by: flack47 - 2007-09-15 10:52
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Thanks for helping me dig deeper into the hole, Bill.
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2007-09-15 10:17
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Bill's the winner.
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