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PhoenixTPA
Daniel Guarro
United States, Florida, Saint Petersburg

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Before Your Time

I stood in the warehouse with my elbows on the counter, disgusted, while Joel spouted about the hardships of his meter reading job.

"These people and their stupid bushes- can't get to the freakin' meter to read it. And the radio-read meters. You have to drive slower than the old people around here to pick up the readings. And this heat is brutal!" Joel glared at me and said, "And you guys aren't replacing these meters fast enough." He grabbed his new gloves from the counter and stormed towards the door.

My patience went out the door first. "Back when I read meters, we had no radio-reads. We read each meter manually, digging out every meter box, and fighting with bushes. We still read 400 meters each day, even on foot, uphill, in the pouring rain and in the hot August sun. And we liked it!"

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wildfeistykitten Comment by: wildfeistykitten - 2007-10-11 16:28
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Hehe, this made me stop and think about all the things that I did when I was younger that this generation would be lost trying to even attempt now.
Jesselise Comment by: Jesselise - 2007-10-01 15:18
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*laughs* I'm only 21 and I'm already telling people younger than me how easy they have it. Good grief, I feel old.

This was a great read. Thank you for sharing :D
PhoenixTPA Comment by: PhoenixTPA - 2007-09-23 05:38
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! :-)
JMBratton Comment by: JMBratton - 2007-09-23 05:32
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You utilized your 145 words well. Very clever. I loved this line: "My patience went out the door first."

Nice!
Jane
MutteringRetreat Comment by: MutteringRetreat - 2007-09-18 00:35
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Wow,

this sounds like a conversation i've had with my folks. It was really fun read.
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