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wordsofheart
Kate Zimmerman
United States, Pennsylvania

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I Feel...Without You

I feel empty without you,
Something is missing
Without you.

I feel lost when you're gone,
The world is shallow
When you're gone.

I feel tears flow from the depths of my heart,
When I know you are not near.

I feel bitterness in the pit of my stomach,
When my soul misses you.

I feel a grey mist invade the world
Of perfect summer days and nights with you,
When I cannot feel your hand in mine.

I feel cold from the inside out,
An icy cyclone fills me with an overwhelming nothingness,
When I cannot hold you in my arms.

I feel as though a large piece of me is missing,
When a phone line blocks me from you.

I feel distant from your world and my world
As though I am looking at life through a glass wall,
When money and distance keep me away from you.

The emptiness I feel without you is unbearable.

I miss your unaltered voice, warm hand in mine,
And reassuring grasp that says, without words,
Everything will be alright.

When I have you, I know nothing can go wrong,
I know I have found everything I wanted in life
Everything I need.

Love with you is all I need.

I can't live without you,
I am a shell of broken dreams, destroyed futures, and lost hopes.
When your eyes can't meet mine.

I am simply lost, without you,
Without everything I ever wanted,
Gone?

I can't explain the love I feel for you,
I only know that I never thought I would find love,
LOVE THIS THIS DEEP.

You make be believe.

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craj Comment by: craj - 2007-09-19 22:47
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Quite good poem , I am anxious to read your another wrinting, hope you will soon upload one .
craj Comment by: craj - 2007-09-15 02:54
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Very sweet poem . I imagine if it was only dedicated to me .. But any way it is very interesting one . The words are more sweet.

The emptiness I feel without you is unbearable.


This sentence touches me a lot .

BY the way i feel pleasure to get myself as the first one to give comment on it .
keep on writing more .


I wish we could make a friendship too
If you would like to than ... mailing address is <chandiraj143@yahoo.com>
hope you are fine unlike me .
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