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skatadude93
Ben Towne
United States, kansas, sterling

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Words twist and tumble
Through my mind
But I can't grab the right word
Or the right line
So we sit
In silence
But it's not uncomfortable
In fact I love it
You rest your head on my chest
As we lay here
Lovers entwined
Hearts tangled
You raise your head
And look into my eyes
And I see our love
Almost as if it's a real force
I don't ever want to lose this moment
You lay your head on my chest once again
And now I can feel your heartbeat
And my hearts skips
And I finally find the words I'm looking for
I love you

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FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy Online- 2008-08-11 16:00
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Very beautiful
great job = ]
Shorty Comment by: Shorty - 2008-01-25 07:59
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i would have to say that this is my fav one of all ur poems i love it and u well g2g love ya ur baby girl ashlynn
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