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MaggieMay
Maggie May Schill
United States, FL, Jacksonville

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Bid Him

I bid him,
To his own devices---
To the spiral of thought,
It darkens-- then lingers.


Harden heart--- cracked ---shards of clarity.

His blood could wilt,
The love of
Youthful trespass.
He stages his barrage.
It is his defense. His first and last;
Within a line of fortitude.

For all I had fought
upon the blank fields
of his disheartenment,
Still he toils,
With futile demons.

Laminate the grasp of his fingers!
And,
Extol his stagnation
upon the empty gaze
Of November.

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jcp200817 Comment by: jcp200817 - 2008-06-01 20:34
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wow, I really liked this one. Like Susan I really liked the last stanza. Especially the part where it say "
Laminate the grasp of his fingers!" Good imagery.
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2007-12-26 11:01
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I like this poem Good job :)
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2007-12-19 11:49
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I also enjoyed the last stanza.
Susan Cook-Jahme Comment by: Susan Cook-Jahme - 2007-11-17 05:58
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Hi Maggie May,
This is good - enjoyed:
Laminate the grasp of his fingers!
And,
Extol his stagnation
upon the empty gaze
Of November.

Susan
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2007-11-06 01:59
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Classic touch is refreshing. Great to read your work again. :)
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