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rosalindknows
rosalind harbin
United States, FL, ocklawaha

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The Barren

Little Mister Leopard sets atop, stares
intently; wants to divine my purpose
shaded. Couched in syllables fair, now harsh,
now kind, now cloaked in sly contempt, the jaded
shroud thrown to shield bones brittle:
another's ego, though perhaps my own.
I've been reading Cham - the Ursa Major
of English literature's critics - at least
the part I call home; of a day and grace
I cannot mimic and neither can you.

Copyright 2007 Rosalind Harbin

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rosalindknows Comment by: rosalindknows - 2007-09-15 07:50
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Thank you, very much! I appreciate your words & advice ALWAYS!
Penned Down Comment by: Penned Down - 2007-09-14 18:21
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Real nice tight piece here Rosalind. I can't find a complaint about it, great word choice throughout.

Love this line:
"the jaded
shroud thrown to shield bones brittle:"
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