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KennethWelling
Kenneth Welling
United States, GA, Marietta

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I Don't Want to Be a Poem Anymore

I first was black ink
In slow Brownian motion. Then out!
To insinuate and dry among the tiny threads of paper.
For a while I was the Buddha, moving through a new darkness
Of silicon and copper, turning and turning on a magnetic disc
When would I ever meet you? When would you look at me?
Look at me. Am I anything without you?
As I fly, tiny photons, writhing through the air
To light the nerves in your eyes
I wonder, will you love me
As the paper did, embracing me
Deep within itself?
I thought I'd never leave.
But it's you I want to be with,
To ride the circuit of your red currents,
To induce specific chemicals to ride with me,
To spark the lonely space between those neurons
Which remember the milky texture of a breast
And the circular rhythm that moved warmth
Through it and into you.

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OilsandSyntax Comment by: OilsandSyntax - 2007-11-16 10:11
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I love this...inventive and original are an understatement here. I like how you took something so common to use all and made it into a a seduction of the senses. Great piece.
Sophia Comment by: Sophia - 2007-10-01 05:47
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I agree this is an original idea, and I liked the descriptions you use. These lines are great:

For a while I was the Buddha, moving through a new darkness
Of silicon and copper, turning and turning on a magnetic disc
esknapp Comment by: esknapp - 2007-09-19 11:47
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Kenneth,
I don't know what to say about this one. Does your wife know you wrote this? I appreciate your recognition of the mechanisms by which we share our formalized expressions of passion, while acknowledging the primacy of the passion. How's that?
alien Comment by: alien - 2007-09-15 02:58
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ooo very passionate.

And very original, too!

I enjoyed this one a lot. It's very... hot.
:)
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