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brigitteliebenbe
brigitte liebenberg
South Africa, Underberg

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Forgiveness

A bloom of hate burst into flower
Like a pink shower on cherry tree in spring
All consuming, standing alone in my gaze
Blocking view of life and sunshine.

A fiery, freezing frost blasts the ground
Covering all with a blanket of crisp, white crystals
Blossoms and leaves shrivelling and shrinking
Snapping, cracking, shattering like glass.

Under the warmth of the golden orb moving slowly
The ice silently withdraws, but be not saddened
For in the quiet moments before the cold dawn
Forgiveness forged in the glistening rime
Hatred in a million particles dispersed and gone.

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GLWard Comment by: GLWard - 2007-09-15 21:03
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This is very nice. The imagery is great. I can feel the cold.
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"There and Back Again"

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A powerful, poetic journey back from the brink - literally! The poetry in this book is a direct result of the creative processes started by entering therapy for depression.The poetry speaks for itself and allows others to relate to the content in their own ways.

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