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Judgment
I've Been Defined And My Time Has Come,
Though Your Judgment Is As Dark As the Night
Like The Moon, I will Dominate The Sky!
Copyright Jenni-Leigh O'Leary 2005
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Seems the judgement is to stay as a immortal soul in a mortal world... Since, the judgement is dark and the moon is going to be around for another 20 billion years before the attachment to the Earth is no longer, but I'm getting a little too over the top with the comment... well verse, with the option to interpret...
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Comment by: GLWard - 2007-09-16 12:45
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| Very nicely done. Yes, it does what you want it to. |
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Comment by: SacredV - 2007-09-16 09:20
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Thank you....I'm glad you see that this it has a different meaning to each reader. That is what it is meant to do.
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| I have really tried hard to interprete where this piece is coming from, however it has so many interesting facets to it, that it could mean a number of things to many people! What I take out of it in the strongest sense is that it has a very spiritual feel to it! Regardless, a very deep concisly written piece...love it! |
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