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TuckerWhite
TuckerWhite
United States, CA

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Frenzy

It attacks me
taking hold,
slithering up my legs,
torso, soul.

A longing, nagging feeling
creating debt,
strangling me till I have
nothing left.

You can diagnose me,
give me pills, shock me
so I can't feel,

It will creep even
still,

up around my back,
tightening grabbing hold,
choking my neck,
it's rattler rattling
up in frenzy!

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Funkylele Comment by: Funkylele - 2006-04-27 08:31
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This is one tightly flexed and corded muscle of poetry.
I especially liked the line "creating debt". I think most of us have felt the skittering spider dance of this anxiety across our skin at one point or another...
wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay - 2006-03-28 10:05
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Ilove the tone, greta imagery, flows well. Nice work
Comment by: - 2006-02-17 08:34
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Your title caught my attention firstly. This poem could be about anything, which is a good thing. Thanks
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-02-13 21:20
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This is my favorite of your poems. Love it everytime I read it.
mickeyp Comment by: mickeyp - 2006-02-10 06:41
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Very nice. The poem moves in the claustrophobia of its intent. Simply expressed. Nothing is unnecessary. The feelings evoked are of a universal nature; there is always that feeling, no matter how joyous we are, that something is amiss- sometimes more intensely than others. It is the one real struggle. Poweful poem.
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