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Chowrunnergo
Les Hernandez
United States, CO, Colorado Springs

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The Bracelet-Wee Stories Challenge 12

'What is it?' Bill asked nervously.

'It's a friendship bracelet.' Ted answered, seeming almost surprised at the question.

'But, it's made out of barbed-wire.'

'And it's a symbol of our friendship. Now, are you going to wear it or not?'

'Couldn't you have made it from, I don't know, cloth?'

'Do you remember when you insisted on us becoming blood brothers?'

Bill seethed and looked away, 'Right. The chainsaw.'

Both sets of eyes fell on Ted's hook.

'Kind of limited the job opportunities, huh?' Bill said.

'Well it made massage therapy sort of cumbersome.'

'Yeah. Oh well, fuck it. Give me the damn bracelet.'

After easing the bracelet on with relatively little pain, Bill smiled. Ted handed him a mallet.

'To make sure it sticks.'

'Right.,' Bill said and took the hammer.

Several agonizing seconds later, Bill admired his blood-splattered bracelet.

'Friends forever.'

'Forever.'

'And now for the other wrist.'


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Patty Dohle Comment by: Patty Dohle - 2008-01-05 10:19
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Oh my god. I laughed out loud!! The dialogue is amazing, and you manage to create wicked characters with just a few lines. Love it!
Your stuff is right up my alley!
GarethCB Comment by: GarethCB - 2007-09-16 11:36
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Really well-constructed story with great dialogue, especially the final line.
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2007-09-16 05:52
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I like a guy who travels to the beat of his own drum, Les! Thanks for an entertaining read.
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