the never ending cycle of myself
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the never ending cycle of myself
i did it again i lost the war
against myself again now
where do i go? who will
love me now?
i don't want your pity
and i don't need your
sympathy, never had
much use for that.
but i'll be fine i will
survive i will live on.
so i don't need you
it's better this way.
i'd just destory you in
the end the way i'm
destorying myself you
wouldn't last.
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Comment by: zepol - 2007-10-13 05:17
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| Ana, this is simple but has the quality of truth and the truth is always a powerful starting point. You open up well here; now edit, edit, edit. Thanks for sharing. |
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Comment by: - 2007-09-16 10:47
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| I like what you have to say, it's a good read, but to me, it needs a whole bunch of grammar work. Maybe you wrote it that way on purpose, but I'm just not seeing it. I think structure is important, but I won't impose it on anyone else, namely becuase my version of structure and others don't always click. Anyways, it's a good read. |
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