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jwilli4
Judy Williams
United States, New York, Freeport

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After 36 years of marriage,

she says to him,'I never loved you.'

In my mind,
that five syllabic phrase
dwells,
under its own volition,
(in prominent position),
for the rest of my life.

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aromatic Comment by: aromatic - 2007-12-06 03:49
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when of course she had loved him often but in her anger despair apathy she wanted to make HIM . . . feeeeel
vencelnovakov Comment by: vencelnovakov - 2007-09-18 20:53
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Reminds me of a rhetorical question, 'what has marriage to do with love?'
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