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ProfessionalMuse
Rachel Peacock
United States, Florida, Ft. Myers

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Goldfish

Shift Slowly
Silvery trails cross over,
touch my skin.
Thousands of sensations...
sick sights through fishbowl eyes,
exploding around me.
Reality disintegrates,
Ha Ha Ha laughing till I die...
Do you know how you look through Fish bowl eyes?
Jokes are many and played on all....
Stand real close together,
So we can all fall......
off our rockers.
See.... Can you see?
Attention I paid when I believed all the lies.
It is all twisted reality in the perception of truth..
Ha....Ha....Ha....
I can see it all with my fishbowl eyes

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Comment by: - 2007-09-30 02:41
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Funny poem.

How we look through Fish bowl eyes

is a great line.

Thanks for the laugh.
anomalyemily Comment by: anomalyemily Online- 2007-09-20 19:46
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This is amazing, I really like the time "jokes on many and played on all" this is great.
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