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ProfessionalMuse
Rachel Peacock
United States, Florida, Ft. Myers

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A Womans Work

Alive and wild
you are unspent....
I wish for your energies to flow through me,
Into the great divide I call my soul.
Soaking up all you have to offer, crazy with it
I turn and twist....
through you I live.
Taste my vibrancy,anew.
A light that shall outshine a dying sun.
I am alive
I am woman
I shall continue forever
I am everyone

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Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-06 23:19
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Smashing. This was amazing I shall say.
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2008-04-26 20:40
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Its been while i've read something like this. Good write.
Saturdayist Comment by: Saturdayist - 2007-11-09 09:27
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into the great divide I call my soul! I wish I wrote that! Great line.

If I were your editor I would make only one tiny comment

Taste my vibrancy, all anew.

Might work better as

Taste my vibrancy, anew.


Thanks! Loved reading you.
Red Pulp Comment by: Red Pulp - 2007-10-23 14:26
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Beautiful
michellejenkins Comment by: michellejenkins - 2007-09-18 13:57
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wow! this is very powerful - love the women's empowerment message! i don't think i'd change a thing! i think it speaks to the hardships of women past, present, and future!
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