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craj
craj sharma
Nepal, banepa, kathmandu

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Melting Down

See! my Mountain is melting down
The rituals,
The traditions,
The culture
And Everything
Is being melted with it .


I can't bare This.


The people, perhaps gone mad
Are flowing with the foreign floods.
The modern World on
ruining my soft nation
see! with the melting mountains
My country is melting down !


I'm trying to pull it up
to the top
and fix it in it
with everything preserved
but its harder.
would you help ?

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Comment by: - 2007-09-18 05:00
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Nice sad poem. Very visual. Its a great Metaphor you have chosen for the way you feel about your country.
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