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brigitteliebenbe
brigitte liebenberg
South Africa, Underberg

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Growing Up

Why do I feel this sense of loss?
Curling around my heart
Like a cat
Making itself comfortable
On the duvet.

I flinch at the sharp pain
Of its claws
As it kneads
The soft cotton cover
To make a home.

Turning, circling
Placing its scent
On every
Single
Fibre.

Finally, it settles
Content, nose buried
Under its tail
To sleep
And dream.

So must I
Grow
And be at peace
With
Losing
You.

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brigitteliebenbe Comment by: brigitteliebenbe - 2007-10-02 07:03
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I am so glad you liked it. The inspiration, I must say, came from my ginger Roo, who can't help but hurt me when he loves but in the nature of the beast, always leaves!
GLWard Comment by: GLWard - 2007-09-18 19:30
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This is a great piece. The construction adds to the emotion. Wonderful.
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"There and Back Again"

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A powerful, poetic journey back from the brink - literally! The poetry in this book is a direct result of the creative processes started by entering therapy for depression.The poetry speaks for itself and allows others to relate to the content in their own ways.

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