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melprophet
Alexander Prophet
Germany, Berlin, Berlin

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Open

Yet is hope;
Impertinent courage has marked you with the sword;
Bleed you do; open;
She will be heard,
On the bed of human sacrifice if need be so- nature's discourse.
Ignorance must not befall you;
Or would you have that she be gone!
Her generosity is wise;
Opinionated claws of steel dig deep,
Sweet pain devours me;
What soul is this that confounds the ego of the vicious at calm ?
Chained yourself who could but you;
Her will is beast;
Conscious evolution of transparent truth;
Nature's essence to uncultured siblings of
Presumptuous knowledge;
Restless compassion, valiant thought,
Abundant to those not yet lost;
Bitter-Sweet lessons.
Fearful emotion readies to submit
Or taste regret;
Love is yet.

Copyright2007©A.N Herbert

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Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-07-10 13:22
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It is very beautiful and full of emotion, but I agree with Falling, waiting for the meaning
Falling Comment by: Falling - 2007-11-30 10:13
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I had to read this several times. Love... demise, bittersweet, open wounds, cutting words. Yet again, another poem in which lingers on the tongue, tasting, waiting for the meaning. You have deep thoughts.
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