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A Work in Progress
I am a love cat, coquettish and fierce, alive with the excitment of being both hunter and prey.
I hunt and fall, for the taste and smell of different lips, different skin. With each man I sweat for the hard, and where there is softness, I curl up inside it.
Together we experiment as if exquisite corpses, handing ourselves over incomplete in anticipation of being worked over by fresh hands.
It makes me wonder though,
How will I ever be happy with my story, when every word creates a multiplicity of possibilies?
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| Life is about possibilities... take as many as you like, as far as I know you only have one life to live... |
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| Heheheheh a little mischievous... Work In Progress suits this fine.. I like that you bend the rules a little.. I once uploaded a fictitious letter to a equally fictitious older sister to the Zoetrope writing site.. boy did tongues wag. |
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Thanks, I'm glad you felt that way about it. I could pretend that I've used "punctuation art" but really I am just a little rough around the edges when it comes to things such as punctuation!
A Work in Progress is the actual title, I thought it fit, maybe a bit cheesy though, and probably a bit confusing on a site like this! |
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I like this...
Aside from the punctuation, (should be a comma after though, and a question mark after the ending sentence...)but this could be what I call "Punctuation art" which means that the writer deliberately used the wrong punctuation for artistic purpose.. and I wrote like that sometimes and get scolded from scholars..
BUT! I love the spirit of this piece, it moves me and I can see where you are coming from and what you mean by every word...
Very good.. you call it a work in progress, but it doesn't need much.. my opinion that is. |
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