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Comment by: Judy - 2008-01-19 12:22
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| i could relate to what you were saying. You put the feelings on paper wonderfully. I lived reading your work. |
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Comment by: Apollo Online- 2008-01-02 18:50
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I like the way you transfer from "When I couldn’t breathe when you walked in the room" to "But this is nothing but hate"
So true how quickly things can go from bliss to shit so quickly...
well done |
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Comment by: Tony16 - 2007-10-20 02:47
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'Something so special at one time
Is now nothing at all' I think tis the way of the world. |
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| I really liked this piece. Each word flows with emotions and I could feel the hurt as I read this. "I may have loved you once, but this is nothing but hate" was my favorite part and it was a great end as well. |
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Comment by: Basil - 2007-09-21 13:31
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Daniel,
this is what poetry is to me,...don't use difficult words when it is not needed,...
You did it perfectly,...yet let us feel what is inside you.
Keep this up,...loved it,..every word,..so recognizable to all of us |
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