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ardenbaino
arden baino
Philippines

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OFF TO URANUS

Planet earth is awesome with all the nice creatures in it
but i think it's not for me.
a cosmic train going to Uranus is waiting.
there's nothing that i need
Except for a ziplock package of aster daisy pollens
i don't want to miss the train
Uranus is a sanctuary
nothing compares to the immunity that i could afford in
it. Astral space asylum.
Mars is not for me
Not even Jupiter
Venus? forget it
I am just going to be in Uranus and grow some daisies
i don't want to miss my cosmic train
i'm off to Uranus

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alishanoelani Comment by: alishanoelani - 2007-11-08 09:56
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cosmic train, nice....
AngelWithScars Comment by: AngelWithScars - 2007-10-16 16:20
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i like the daisies...it represents alot of things...i was able to rummage through my brain and interpret the poem in 100ways... nice one..
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