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Julia Press Simmons
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“This is my work, Ann. Everyone can’t be at home. I’ve deadlines I have to meet.”

“I don’t lie around, Ed; I care for your children; I barely get a moment's rest.”

“Sure you do. I need some coffee.” He walked into the kitchen.

“Did you save this yet?”

“No, not yet.”

Ann reached over and pressed delete.

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mikepyro Comment by: mikepyro Online- 2008-05-08 21:17
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perfect how it is, simple, biting and well done.
bitter but true. good job.
Comment by: - 2008-04-29 09:21
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I wish someone would do that to me, lol. Short, sweet, and made a point. I like it.
GraceyLou Comment by: GraceyLou - 2008-03-23 14:15
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that was very cute! I like it!
krademacher Comment by: krademacher Online- 2007-12-16 21:34
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youch! Hilarious.
fuyukodomo Comment by: fuyukodomo - 2007-10-01 08:51
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Oh no! So cruel :) Nothing constructive to say -- I like it and I don't think it needs any changes.
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"Strawberry Mansion: A Philadelphia Story"

by Julia Press Simmons



Set in a small section of North Philadelphia, in the spring of 1996, Strawberry Mansion depicts three teenage girls’, Tabitha, Lisa, and Shanice; struggle to rise above domestic violence, incest, and promiscuity, on their journey to become successful young women

Strawberry Mansion: A Philadelphia Story

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