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“This is my work, Ann. Everyone can’t be at home. I’ve deadlines I have to meet.”
“I don’t lie around, Ed; I care for your children; I barely get a moment's rest.”
“Sure you do. I need some coffee.” He walked into the kitchen.
“Did you save this yet?”
“No, not yet.”
Ann reached over and pressed delete.
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Comment by: mikepyro Online- 2008-05-08 21:17
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perfect how it is, simple, biting and well done.
bitter but true. good job. |
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Comment by: - 2008-04-29 09:21
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| I wish someone would do that to me, lol. Short, sweet, and made a point. I like it. |
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| that was very cute! I like it! |
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| youch! Hilarious. |
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| Oh no! So cruel :) Nothing constructive to say -- I like it and I don't think it needs any changes. |
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"Strawberry Mansion: A Philadelphia Story"
Set in a small section of North Philadelphia, in the spring of 1996, Strawberry Mansion depicts three teenage girls’, Tabitha, Lisa, and Shanice; struggle to rise above domestic violence, incest, and promiscuity, on their journey to become successful young women
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