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crackednotbroken
Identity Crisis
United States, Texas

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The Kiss

Kiss in the morning
In the afternoon
Kiss on the nights
That I am lonely...

Distraction, not feeling
Barring sweet, no meaning
Poison laden hooks
Forgive them, ever wondering

How blooms blossom
Soft rose petal, parting
Falls away, cycle
Pollinate and remember

Braided assumption, sunken
The Kiss parting, fell away
Left me waiting, to chance
Faultless Kiss another day

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-10 19:25
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Great imagery, you are a very good writter I enjoy reading your work:)
acradianburn Comment by: acradianburn - 2007-11-19 09:33
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nice imagery here, a good poem for sure, gothic undertones at work here too. i liked the line "pollinate and remember" as well.
Audiogeist Comment by: Audiogeist - 2007-11-05 14:55
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Brilliant images in this poem.

Especially liked: 'Distraction, not feeling
Barring sweet, no meaning
Poison laden hooks' - the worst kind of kisses - would rather do without..

I loved that you've filled each verse with a meaning that's carried through the whole of the poem. Brilliant!

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lostcambion Comment by: lostcambion - 2007-11-04 23:07
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i wish i could write like that.
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