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As I sit alone, beneath the pale moon light,
Stars above me shine down their glow,
The raging tide of sleep I try to fight.
As faeries sing upon the land below.

Stars above me shine down their eerie glow.
I cannot miss the magic of this night.
As faeries sing upon the land below,
The mighty dragons begin their evening flight

I cannot miss the magic of this night
For though mortal I may be, and grounded,
The mighty dragons begin their evening flight
To carry me away to worlds unfounded.

For though mortal I may be, and grounded,
As fey mist begins to swirl upon the land
To carry me away to worlds unfounded
And dreams I can't begin to understand

As fey mist begins to swirl upon the land.
The raging tide of sleep I try to fight,
And dreams I can't begin to understand,
As I sit alone, beneath the pale moon light.

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