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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-26 11:51
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This is just gorgeous PromKing:
"Azure eyes mock the sea
gold-spun tresses wave as wheat
ripened on a sun-drenched lea
paired to lips pure passioned heat" |
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Comment by: Sophia - 2008-04-23 07:41
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| I like the references, (one of my favourite books) and really enjoyed the way this flows. |
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| Good suggestion, Frankman. I tend to use too many qualifiers. There oughta be a support group - Over-qualifiers Anonymous? |
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| Calls to my mind, Tess of the Durberviles. YOu know the book? I enjoyed the poem. Only in stanza 1, I wish that the last line continues in the active voice that the preceding lines do. No need for |as|. Maybe "milk gives butter or " milk... whatever. But nice work |
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Very pretty....:) and whispy
Lisa |
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