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Ethgar
Ethgar Rios
United States, NJ, Kearny

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Allusion to ‘A Little Romance’ in a Venetian Riddle

I traipse through
cobblestones
walkway of this
Adriatic Queen

Golden chariot
-a gasconade
treads blue waters
in brilliant wash

while somewhere
on a gondola
little Lauren King
kisses Daniel
in darkness
under Ponte
dei Sospiri
as stripes
red and white
go rushing by
patrolling
for pickpockets

(Julius is safe)


maybe love
is not won
or bargained
but stolen

these thoughts
reflected
on the spectacle
of an accolade dome
-Chiesa d'Oro
sits a giant
pulpit guardian
sleeping over
the remains
of her master.
His horses
unmanned
lay waiting
at the steps.


and just perhaps
Andrew Chugg is right
true purgatory

Oh Alexander!
Is it you
entombed
in echoes of
countless pilgrims
who genuflect
at your feet

in vain

they call you

Marco.

Conqueror interred
as a saint
in all the spoils
of crusades
left by henchmen
merchants and
myrmidon alike.

Aristotle lies silent
his pupil mislaid
the bell tolls
from St. Mark's
Campanile.

famous scriptures
succumbed to ash
-scrolls of Alexandria
and the wind
strewed them
to the sea
returning
here to sink
this lavish citadel
inch by inch.

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I wrote this a while ago. A friend of mine here on editred encouraged me to post it… I was inspired by an old movie (A Little Romance) and somewhere while I was writing it I thought of the controversy surrounding Alexander the Great’s missing tomb. Strange but the well beloved Venice seems mostly a mosaic of looted treasures including St. Mark’s horses. Booty carried by Crusaders from the Byzantine Empire. I guess love can be stolen.

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Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2007-10-27 20:24
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maybe love
is not won
or bargained
but stolen

wow! interesting lines, sad but perhaps true for some...you make me want to go see the movie "A Little Romance" again. Loved the 2nd and last stanza. Great writing as usual.
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2007-10-20 15:24
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I often find myself inspired to write after watching movies; whether romance, action or comedy. A writer always seems to find something to write when touched by the universe of creativity in any form. Loved this!

Yvy
fredav Comment by: fredav - 2007-10-01 08:40
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Hahaha! You know what I love about your poems.. the way you use language. The words itself. I always learn a new word (today it was gasconade). This was well written. It flowed very well and sounded awesome when read aloud. beautiful write, Ethgar. Thanks for sharing.
KennethWelling Comment by: KennethWelling - 2007-09-28 12:19
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As usual, I like your comments almost as much as your poem. "I guess love can be stolen." I loved Venice. When I was there last, there was graffiti on the wall translated it meant "Assassinate Americans!", but I didn't care. It is such a beautiful city.
Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2007-09-27 17:46
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I love free-verse. It liberates the voice and imagination of the poet. Ethgar, this truly is a masterpiece. It's breathless, exhilarating and wonderfully enjambed. A true wordsmith, you are.
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