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Anne
Anne Dickson
United Kingdom, Northern Ireland, Cookstown

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MY DAD ©

My dad was wonderful,
my dad was wise.
even when he brought tears to my eyes.
He usually smiled,
so rarely frowned.
He always wanted me safe and sound.

He could be stern,
sometimes hard,
He was not happy, when I made him mad.
But through it all,
I know you see.
He only wanted the best for me.

He is not here,
I miss him so.
I was sorry to see him go.
He's with me still ,
deep in my heart,
so we are never far apart.

I love him now,
I always will.
He is in heaven and love him still.
He is watching over me,
seeing only,
what his eyes can see.

He was my father,
he was my friend.
I will be with him in the end.
When my life expires you see,
I know,
he is waiting there for me.


(This was the very first poem I ever wrote)


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sarra Comment by: sarra - 2007-11-08 02:07
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I think losing parents is one of the hardest things to go through. I'm only speaking because I have no children nor a husband... anyway, my mother died in 84 when I was just about to turn 11. it was a month before my birthday and 2 days before valentines day. It was hard.

My dad, I've been so blessed to have him with me. There's going to come a day that I do not ever want to happen; I fear I will completely lose it. I don't know how I will handle that grief. But this poem kind of spoke loudly to me at any rate. I know all our loved ones who have passed on will be there to meet us when we join them.

beautiful, beautiful read.
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-10-02 12:44
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thank you kav, cherley and old fart for your messages.i am glad you all liked this even though at the time I had not a clue wnat I was doing
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2007-10-02 08:21
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Lovely Poem... so sweet and touching. It's great how you found comfort in your words which have come straight from the heart- Fantastic work as always!
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2007-09-28 09:37
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It's so great you found poetry as a way of sharing your feelings and releaving your pain. Your dad sounds like he was a wonderful father. I miss my parents.
YeOldeFart Comment by: YeOldeFart - 2007-09-27 10:38
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Anne your love and the way you express it is the reward of parenting.
My dad was a stoic old Finn who had great difficulty expressing his love. Once in his older years I brought home a blue ribbon I had won at the county fair for a photograph. He looked at me and said, "I knew you could do it." Nothing he ever said meant so much to me. You've inspired me to write a poem about that incident.
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