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Richard Nimz
United States, TX, Fort Worth

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Out the Lighted Window

Out the lighted window
in the murmuring trees of night

whispered voices call up an old poem
writing slowly
drawing in the words and breathing them out
in a timeless – timefree - meter

I sit at my desk, listening to the ancient voices,
feel the cool syllables
the sweetdarkheavy scent of them
flirting dangerously with my nose.

I lay my pen down, then think better
and lock it away in the desk

This is a poem I cannot write.

The words are too big and dark

They would absorb my heart

And I would cease to be, my pen clattering to the floor.

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Comment by: - 2007-09-27 18:21
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possessed by the devil to write?

I do not like the "cool syllables," because the rest of the poem made me think warm for some reason.

Try to build your apocalypse in a little earlier, because until the last three lines it is a poem about a poem.

Sounds good.

Peace.
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