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diyanimal
diyanimal
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oh shannon

shannon ran down the beach sometime way, way, way after midnight - heading towards the early version of the sun

sand between her toes- wind whipping through her 200 dollar dye job - twisting itself around her time stained face - headed towards the late version of the moon

and then

shannon couldn't run anymore - her dye stained hair found a place to nestle tightly up on her head - the wind ceased to whip

and shannon wasn't shannon

anymore

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Comment by: - 2007-11-01 13:33
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This has words, but says nothing.

Magic trick.
TequilaTwilight Comment by: TequilaTwilight - 2007-10-04 00:38
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definitely a poem that needs re-reading. Feel like i'm on the brink of realisation but not quite there yet...will have another read later and see if i come to the same conclusion! (your work seems to spark a lot of wonder in me!) x
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