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Nora
Nora Gruenberg
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Tony Forgot--Kero's Challenge

"Ready? We've got about forty-five minutes until the show."

“I can't believe you, Tony. I never thought I'd get to see Barry Manilow live."

"I wanted to make your birthday special."

"Mission accomplished," she said, buckling her seatbelt.

Lori had used her artistic abilities to create a poster for Barry. She'd sketched a bold profile and embedded tiny lights into his nose. Beneath the profile was the line, "Pick Me, Barry."

She'd originally made the poster for her boss, Holly, who saw Barry at the Star Theater last summer. Barry had, indeed, picked Holly to join him onstage. Lori hoped desperately that lightning would strike twice.

As they merged from I-57 onto the Dan Ryan, she popped in a CD.

"Her name was Lola..." She began.

"She was a showgirl..." He joined in.

He inhaled sharply after the word showgirl. She knew him so well she didn't have to ask. But she couldn't help herself.

"You forgot the tickets, didn't you?"

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Nora Comment by: Nora Online- 2007-12-19 14:16
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Tee hee! I made P pee! So sorry!
Comment by: - 2007-12-19 14:14
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You made me pee, cuz! I couldn't make it to the bathroom in time in my weakened condition! I used to shimmy to that song in my 5th Grade Beginning Jazz class. I definitely would've moved up the ladder quicker had I wired X-mas lights to my nasal orfices.
Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2007-10-01 15:17
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Congrats, Nore, you just 'picked me' to the prize - make Kero rue the day he gave up his rights to his avatar - Grae.
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2007-10-01 12:43
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Hehe - 'pick me' under his lit up nose. Very funny, Nora. Rest of the story was great too - and congratulations on the win.

Cheers

Karen
Audiogeist Comment by: Audiogeist - 2007-10-01 08:04
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lmao! This is great Nora...the lights in the nose made me laugh out loud!
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