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Comment by: Scrissy - 2008-10-12 18:49
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| Thank you, David... this one is a favorite of mine as I love mangoes! |
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Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-10-11 22:25
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| A short poem with an endless thought. Well done. Best wishes. |
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Comment by: - 2007-10-01 08:05
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Thanks for both of your comments.
Green: will cange that typo. Thanks for spotting it! |
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Comment by: - 2007-10-01 08:05
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Thanks for both of your comments.
Green: will cange that typo. Thanks for spotting it! |
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Comment by: - 2007-10-01 00:05
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| I guess you can use "mangoes" as plural for mango, but if I were you I would write "mangos". I read the poem as a man going, and it didn't give a very good image. Just a friendly advice |
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