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slippinginandoutofreality

activity in the city
andthe waywe relate is sometimes very real!
thoghtsandbeleifs close toschoolandwork
ourmindbosiesand souls sometimes
sliplike fish
fishin our coralcitybuidings steets strangersandparks
inthe sun or dark the three entities mind,bodyand soul
competeormelt lke strange weather
like aoplanet with three moonstugging and pulling each other

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auscowster Comment by: auscowster - 2006-02-09 10:47
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well i had to first look up metaphysical in the dictionary lol before i made a fool of my self as i often do but it seams that you have got this one right from what i understood
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