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adebnath
Atanu Debnath
India, Delhi, New Delhi

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IT HAS NO NAME

It has no name...
I donno what it is, its shadowed..
Its vague, kinda pitchy
And mourning always
I cant see it..
Invisible or blinding ?
Not sure.
Its like
A black hole-
Swallows up all smiles in no time!
Those smiles which take days to bud,
Nights to cherish..
Its no thing ,its not 'some thing',
But again its not 'nothing'
Its there!
It doesnt have a life ,
But it still lives..
It lives to strangle and choke life off!
Its bad just bad, hatred all around!
It causes a holocaust,a catastrophe,a cataclysm
But then I still wake up,
I wake up and surprised I see...
That its a new day...
The sun has grown a day older, so have we...

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Comment by: - 2007-10-06 11:27
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I hate it... It's not very poetic at all, it just has a bunch of rambling as far as I can tell, I don't get where the meaning is, there is no feel here at all... It's just awful, I'm sorry but it is...
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